Eve’s descent
On plain a bench my subject I
Where blue a heaven upon him rest
But clouded by the grave lament
This man’s hope bereft
What troubles you, and grieves you so II
That under bluest heaven’s breast
No more sun than on darkest day
Your plains do beset
Oh happy day, this day did start III
As Morpheus wished the night good day
And my slumber did soon depart
On this day of May
The nightingale did make me wake IV
And made my spirits sear the sky
For on this lovely day of May
In Eve’s arms I’d lie
She’d sent for me the day before V
A message with such del’cate scent
That flowers envied, withered pale
That for me was meant
We’ll meet, it said, to my delight VI
And give the morrow to Amour
Play and do to others envy
What we both adore
So on this lovely day of May VII
I dreamt of what was heaven sent
And what soon mortal hands would hold
No one ever felt
I tried to eat, but swallowed not VIII
For excitement was far too great
What good will do these earthly goods
Upon heaven’s gate
And thus pure I entered daylight IX
Many a lark did guide me way
Surely soon I’d enter her hall
On this day of May
Yet ravens too did fly and shriek X
One, then two, then many did so
Came shrieking down, you, please make haste
And faster I’d go
So running I came down to where XI
We two lovers agreed to meet
But on this lovely day of May
No life I did greet
What horror then did blind my sight XII
There she lay, my beautiful Eve
Poisoned at heaven’s gate she lied
Sleeping her last sleep
No sooner then her husband turned XIII
Accusing me of her descent
In jealousy of could not have
Poison her I’d sent
A mockery and such charade XIV
‘t was you who’ve done this loathsome deed
I screamed and for the love of all
Her was whom I need
Yet no one came to my defence XV
They’d seen they said that I had brought
When running down, Eve’s early death
Was what they all thought
So they all looked and turned my way XVI
No more than this had to be said
He’s guilty, no man will deny
They screamed and I fled
Thus heavy-hearted and condemned XVII
I now await their swift return
Their minds made-up to make me pay
Tomorrow I’ll burn
And so on plain a bench I sit XVIII
Where blue a heaven upon me rests
But clouded by the grave lament
All my hopes bereft















Comments
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Feel me - free me
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Feel me - free me
I think its gorgeous, it flows rather smoothyl, and as always you have fantasic word choice.
One thing to ponder upon though, since its in ballad form, maybe you'd try writing it with rhyme as well? Just something for you to ponder love XD!
It's written in the traditional ballad rhyme scheme, ABCB... if that was what you meant... not sure really..; anyway, thank you for the comment though
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i realy love it, great writing... i love it
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